17 06 05 Elephant - Lisa

ELEPHANT

His trunk is as long,
As a slimy snake.
And it is ready to spray.

Strolling,strolling,strolling,
Down the hill.
Strolling,strolling,strolling,
Makes him chill.

His tusks are as
White as milk,
And as sharp
As a, sharks tooth.

Strolling,strolling,strolling,
Down the hill.
Strolling,strolling,strolling,
Makes him chill.

His head is as big as
A football, and as wrinkled
like a creased jumper.

Strolling,strolling,strolling,
Down the hill.
strolling,strolling,strolling,
Makes him chill.

His skin is as
Brown as a sewers,
And as wrinkled like
A creased jumper.

Strolling,strolling,strolling,
Down the hill.
Strolling,strolling,strolling,
Makes him chill.

His belly is as wobbly
Like a bowl full of jelly.

Strolling,strolling,strolling,
Down the hill.
Strolling,strolling,strolling,
Makes him chill.

Lisa Campbell.

 


OMG,i love this poem! I’m a student at Scott Middle School and i’m studying poetry and i just absolutly love this poem!!!
Rahvin Waldon (Email) (URL) - 18 04 07 - 02:55

I’m a student of good earth. I like this poem very much.
I didn’t like poems before.But after I read this poem, I started loving poems
m.karthika (Email) - 24 07 07 - 14:35

Hi! I’m a student of good earth. I love this poem very much.I didn’t like poems.But now, I started loving poems.
m.karthika - 24 07 07 - 14:41

i am in love w/ elephants so i absolutely love this poem. it has a lot of good figurative language like repitition, rhyme, and simile!!!! :)oh and i go to oak valley middle school:P
Catarina Benavides - 11 09 08 - 01:47

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