28 02 05 The Traveller Mystery

UNLOCK THE DOOR I SAY SAID THE TRAVELLER,
WHEN THE MOON POLISHED GROUND SHOOK.
THEN THE LIGHTNING BROKE OUT,
THE DOOR SUDDENLY CREAKED OPEN .
THE OWL SWOOSHED OUT OF THE PINE TREES,
THEN THE CROW SQUAWKED OUT OF THE BROKEN TURRET.
THEN THERE WAS NOTHING THERE WAS NO OWLS CROWS BATS OR,
HOUSE NOT EVEN THE TRAVELLER OR,
HIS HORSE NO FOREST OR,
MOON NO STARS NO DARKNESS OR CREATURES.

RYAN

 


I love the way you use the description of the different birds flying to create the frightening atmosphere.
Peter Ford (Email) (URL) - 01 03 05 - 22:08

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