30 05 07 + 3 - 7 The Changing Moon - Liam

The full moon is like a hard round basketball spinning around the world.
A big round birthday cake just sitting there alone.
A round baseball getting hit up into the air and not moving.


One two three,
Canít you see?
There is one here with me.

The changing moon is like a small curvy banana just sitting there waiting to get eaten.
A white lonely sea saw just sitting there waiting to get played on,
A round shiny handle waiting to get pulled.


One two three,
Canít you see?
There is no one here with me.

By Liam

(star)good spelling
(star)excellent adjectives
(wish)keep it up!
Liam - 31 05 07 - 10:14

(star)Very good words.
(star)Good chorus and it rhymes good.
(wish)Keep up the very good work.
Kris - 01 06 07 - 11:34

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