30 05 07 + 3 - 7 The Changing Moon - Liam
The full moon is like a hard round basketball spinning around the world.A big round birthday cake just sitting there alone.
A round baseball getting hit up into the air and not moving.
One two three,
Can’t you see?
There is one here with me.
The changing moon is like a small curvy banana just sitting there waiting to get eaten.
A white lonely sea saw just sitting there waiting to get played on,
A round shiny handle waiting to get pulled.
One two three,
Can’t you see?
There is no one here with me.
By Liam
good spelling
excellent adjectives
keep it up!
Liam - 31 05 07 - 10:14
Very good words.
Good chorus and it rhymes good.
Keep up the very good work.
Kris - 01 06 07 - 11:34
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