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the traveller from Troy

Help! Said the traveller kicking the moon lit door.
With wolf’s howling at the moon light
And trees screeching of the window pain and the walls.

Help! Said the traveller once again with more fear.
With a owl flying above his head
And Statues looking at him about to jump off there stands.

LET ME IN! Shouted the traveller bashing
The pain glass window he then ran to the
Back and broke down the door.

By Troy

one comment:

(star) You used good eerie efect
(star) You made a good story
(wish) add speach marks
Jamie - 22 05 07 - 12:04




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