Primary Seven Personification Poem

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Primary Seven were studying Longfellow's poem Hiawatha. We used personification to write some poems of our own in the form of riddles.

Sophie D

If I climb up a tree,
You can try but you wont find me.

I am the fastest in the world you see,
You will never catch me.

I am strong and skilful,
Some say I'm boastful.

It's not wrong to be proud,
In my big crowd.

You couldn't keep me as a pet,
Do you know what I am yet?

Lee

If you meet me you would be lucky to stay alive
The only way to escape is to deep sea dive.

I should not be played with a child.
Sometimes I can go a little bit wild.

I am afraid to go into the sea.
Nothing else in the universe can destroy me.

Sophie C

I'm pretty and red with lots of petals
But be careful there might be nettles

I grow in the sun and the rain
In the winter is when I go plain

I'm very careful and kind
I'm also neat I think you'll find

I have some jaggy bits on my stem
But people give me to show they love them

Jodie S.

I can be scary and I can be kind.
I can go anywhere but I have to hide.

I can be like a human just a little bit.
I can be lazy and I can be fit.

I can be moaney and I can be scary.
I can be kind and I can be gentle (not very).

You may know I can't put my feet on the ground.
So I can't run round and round.

I can turn your light on and off .
I can follow you and if you buy a new house I will put you off.

Antony K

I am vicious evil and fast.
The other animals better make sure they are not last.

The animals are scared of me because I am a killer
I will chase you till I catch you and eat you for dinner.

I am yellow and I have brown spots
Every one thinks I'm cute and loves me lots.

Christopher

I am the fierce ferocious lord of all great evil,
My evil destructive is where you shall have your burial,

I can steel your soul before you even know,
Down below I will put on an evil show,

I don't care about your feelings,
When I hear the evil dried out squealings.

Lauren

I am crazy, mad, energetic and fun,
When I hunt I am always on the run.

I sleep, hunt and play all day,
Even on a cold morning in May.

I am the prince of the jungle the lion before me,
Come into my homeland and you will see.

I love the water and the land,
Even if I tried it, probably the sand.

I am orange with black spots on me,
Look for my friends they will be up a tree.

Lorna

I am bright and colourful and I'm way up high.
You're sure to see me I glow in the sky.

I'm always cheery and I will always smile.
I'll not go away I always stay for a while.

I'm very eye catching you'll always spot me.
Well I'm very nice and I glow and glee.

Hailey

I am as bright as can be,
You can see me from the sea,

I make you feel happy as happy can be,
Can't you see I am ready for you are you ready for me.

I am happy and bright in more ways than one,
I can see you two playing and having so much fun,

Don't leave me alone this is very dull,
I really don't want to stay so still

Elizabeth

I always make the sky nice and colourful
And I can also make it beautiful.

My favourite colour is pink and blue
And sometimes I get lonely and want to play with you.
Always remember what you have been told
At the end of me you will find a pot of gold.

Kayleigh

I will be your friend because I'm very, very kind,
But I'm also very slow so I hope you don't mind.

I get tired all the time because of my heavy shell,
You would know too if you had one aswell.

I can go a little fast but not as fast as you,
I get lonely because I'm slow but it's not a lie, its true.